The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

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Given is a diagram illustrating the manufacturing of
leather
goods. Prior to the actual production of the
leather
products, it is first necessary to
desiccation
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to animal skin. There is
then
transported by lorry to the factory for processing. On arrival, it is staged on
vat
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a vat
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with water and lime,
then
washed and transferred to another vat where it is soaked in lime. Having been cleaned in
this
way, the material goes through a large rolling machine for flattening. In the
next
phase
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it is immersed in
liquid
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a liquid
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called tannin, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter.
This
is followed by polish where the wheel is moved over the surface to produce a
shane
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.
Finally
, the
leather
is forwarded to a different factory for producing
into
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the
leather
goods we see in the shops,
for instance
, shoes, handbags and sports.

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