The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

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Given is a diagram illustrating the manufacturing of

leather

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goods. Prior to the actual production of the

leather

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products, it is first necessary to

desiccation

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desiccant

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to animal skin. There is

then

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transported by lorry to the factory for processing. On arrival, it is staged on

vat

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a vat

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with water and lime,

then

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washed and transferred to another vat where it is soaked in lime. Having been cleaned in

this

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way, the material goes through a large rolling machine for flattening. In the

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phase

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,phase

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it is immersed in

liquid

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a liquid

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called tannin, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter.

This

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is followed by polish where the wheel is moved over the surface to produce a

shane

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Shane

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Finally

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, the

leather

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is forwarded to a different factory for producing

into

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apply

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the

leather

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goods we see in the shops,

for instance

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, shoes, handbags and sports.

Thu Mar 05 2020

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words leather with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

142 words

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The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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