Some reads or sees national news, while other think international news is important too . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Being able to be connected with the whole
wo
rld it i
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world, it
s essential to listen to the news either it would be domestic or global news. While some prefer to just focus on local news over international news, I,
however
, agree with those who hold the opinion that worldwide news is imperative. On the one hand, it could be thought that national news has precedence rather than global news as
such
news is somewhere relevant to their life.
For example
, farmers who belong to rural areas want to know about agricultural prospects to increase the business.
As a result
, they tend to watch local news in the election period to know how much subsidies they are getting from the government.
Moreover
, followers of national news often find it difficult to compete at a global level since their knowledge is constraints.
For instance
, a person took participation in the renowned show titled “Who will be a millionaire?” That person fails to answer many questions on the show because it contains questions from all over the
world
.
On the other hand
, I would argue that worldwide news is incredibly popular and important among people from different zones as hearing
such
news not only do they feel connected deeply with each other but
also
they are more aware of day-to-day happening regardless of geographical area. To exemplify, consider China, who is suffering from the outbreak disease of Coronavirus has a remarkable impact on the whole
world
.
As a result
, people will be aware of the symptoms of
such
diseases.
Furthermore
, if any country is affected by the crisis of politics, finance or climate, the entire
world
simultaneously would suffer from their economy’s currency fluctuations and the stock market. In conclusion,
although
national news assists them to be aware of surrounding as well as getting subsidies, through international news fluctuation, people will be aware of currencies and the stock market.

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