Some businesses find that new employees finishing their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem?
Some employers find newly graduated
employees
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are the high amount of remote learning and Linking Words
technology
dependency and suggests more group assignments in education and more Use synonyms
teamwork
training in a professional environment.
The main problems with the lack of basic social ability are the intensive amount of remote learning and over-reliance on Use synonyms
technology
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the pandemic, many schools and universities implement remote learning, Linking Words
as a result
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Solutions to these problems are more group tasks in education and Linking Words
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workshops in businesses. In order to tackle the sense of individuality in remote learning, teachers could give more group-based assignments to their students, Use synonyms
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are the high amount of remote learning and Use synonyms
technology
dependency. These can be solved through more group assignments and team-building training.Use synonyms
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