The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.

The bar chart illustrated the
amount
of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the
period
from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden. The
amount
of paper collected was in a decrease trend, dropping from 57 tons in 2011 to 40 tons in 2013 and
then
increased again, reaching 70 tons in 2015. The figure has been always in
first
place
among the 4 groups, except in 2013 in
second
spot. The
second
place
was glass collection during the
period
, except in 2013 when it replaced the paper collection in the
first
place
. After 2013, it dropped to
second
place
again, ending up in 52 tones in 2015. The
amount
of tins and garden collected respectively, were in the
third
and the fourth
place
. The figure of tins varied from the lowest, 27 tons in 2012 to 39 tons at the end of the
period
. The one of garden fluctuated slightly as well with 15 tons, the lowest in 2012 to 35 tons in 2015. Overall, during the
period
, the
amount
of collections in all four types of wastes presented the similar trend in all individual year, except in 2013 when the glass was collected mostly.

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