The pie chart shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart demonstrates
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the reasons
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why agricultural lands are now becoming less productive and start to degrade.The table gives us information about the
reason
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land
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degradation in
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different places of the world during the 1990s. Looking
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given pie chart, we can infer that
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gazing is
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main
reason
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land
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degradation followed by over-cultivation and
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deforestration
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deforestation
.
Over gazing
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is the main
reason
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for nearly 35% of it which is five times as much as the other factors.The is less than
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difference between over gazing and
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deforestration
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deforestation
by only 2% with percentages of 30% and 28% respectively. From the given table, we can find Europe as the region with the most cultivable
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degraded
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nearly 28% of total
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degraded which is caused
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deforestration
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deforestation
and over-cultivation. Europe is followed by Oceania regions which include New Zealand and Australia, which have a high
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gazing percentage of 11.3%. The regions of North America have only 6% of
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degraded and accounts for
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percentage of
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deforestration
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deforestation
and gazing. In general, we observe that
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gazing
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the main
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for degradation followed by
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deforestration
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deforestation
and
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over-cultivation
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which
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not too far behind.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words reason, land, deforestration with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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