Write about the following topic. Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your ouwn opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people today are interested in

fashion

because it became an important part of our

lives even

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lives, even

though it costs a

lot

of

money but

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money, but

, in reality many people are busy with thinking about it.

First

,

fashion

cost a

lot

of

money

, but

this

depends on whether the

person

is rich or poor because the rich

person

can buy everything.

Secondly

, a

lot

of people in our world love new

fashion

and are willing to pay a

lot

of

money

for them because it is addictive for them,

for example

: I had a friend who he didn't have much

money but

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money, but

he liked

fashion

so he took

money

from his friends to buy his new stuff.

Third

, in fact the poor

person

pays his

money

for the requirements of his daily life,

such

as food, because anyway he cannot pay the cost of

fashion

because he didn’t have enough

money

.

However

,

fashion

is very expensive nowadays because manufacturers pay a

lot

of millions

to

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for

making them.

On the other hand

, it is acceptable because it is an important part of our life But

this

also

depends on the type of

person

,

For example

, actors and celebrities pay a

lot

of

money

for

fashion

because they care about how people see them and want to keep the number 1.

Also

the manager who has a business meeting must wear a modern clothes because the other

person

will see him as an elegant

person

and

then

they will do a big work

between

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among

them. In my opinion,

fashion

costs a

lot

of

money

, but it is an important part of our lives because at

this

time a

person

has to keep pace with the development of

fashion

because we are in the twentieth century because it is the age of

fashion

.