The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter. * Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly. * Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors. * Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with a dejected feeling due to some of the prevailing concerns in our community with the way the rubbish is handled. As we we live
at
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in
the Pinehurst condos which is closer to the municipal office, a better service in handling the garbage was expected.
However
, to our astonishment the concerned department, which handles the trash collection has not showed up for about three weeks now. Our community being the newest in the surroundings was built in about 10 acres of land and accommodating around 250 units.
Thus
,
it
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It
is not feasible for the leasing office to
setup
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set up
extra dump areas and the existing one's have about two dumpsters each which is completely full. The extra litter sits on the floor, causing tremendous inconvenience to the pedestrians and spreading the foul smell around. I would like to request you to pass an internal order to the appropriate department to act on
this
and proceed with the rubbish collection as soon as possible. Looking forward for your kind response on
this
.
Yours
faithfully, Nishanth

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