Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

When it comes to modern ways of entertainment, there are those who claim that, not only have computer games created safe and
pleasent
affording pleasure; being in harmony with your taste or likings
pleasant
moments for gamers, but they
also
become teaching
instuments
a device that requires skill for proper use
instruments
instrument
that
has increased
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have increased
users
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users'
user's
knowledge extensively.
Conversely
, there are
also
those who believe that these games will negatively impact the people's health. I strongly support
this
idea that playing
video
games in a controlled way will have an enormous benefit for players, because of two compelling reasons explained in
this
essay.
First
and foremost, computer games result in creativity and
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
of individuals.
This
means that they usually make a
situtation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
for
playes
participate in games or sport
plays
players
in which they have to swiftly decide what is the best step to take.
In other words
, those who play
video
games will be faced issues that they are not able to meet in their real life.
Consequently
, by understanding the results in just
few seconds
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a few seconds
, players will understand if their moves were properly made or not. Based on the result of an
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
research done in 2010 by Tehran University of Medical Sciences, more than two-
third
of surgeons played at least one computer or mobile game during their residency.
This
will support
this
idea that
video
gaming
provide
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provides
a great chance for raise creativity and awareness.
Furthermore
, there are specific
video
games which are designed for teaching purposes. It means that because of proven
positve
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
influences of these games, there are educational institutions which pay gaming companies to produce games that children can use them to learn.
For
example there
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example, there
are several games teachers use in the pre-school classes to teach the alphabet and basic mathematics to the children. To cite a clearer example, the modern simulation games
such
as Microsoft Flight Simulator are designed to train and evaluate future pilots. These trainees are able to use
this
game as a trial and error tool to
further
their skills in controlling
airplanes
. To conclude,
also some believe
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some also believe
that due to potential negative effects,
video
gaming should be limited
for
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to
the children and even the adults, I strongly believe that these types of games
plays
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play
a pivotal role in making individuals to become more and more creative and
skillful
, ideally while they are spending an amiable leisure time.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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