Write about the following topic: Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Although

some people think that for

development

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the development

of

children educating

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children, educating

them at

home

is

best way

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the best way

,

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,

others hold

a

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an

opinion that

school

plays

more significant role

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a more significant role

in their education.Undoubtedly, both approaches have their own advantages.

However

,

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,

I believe

study

at

school

is more beneficial than of

study

at

home

for overall development of children. To commence with

,

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,

school education

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school, education

consists of

many positive points

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the many positive points

which can help children to be a responsible citizen.

Firstly

,

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,

teachers in

school

can help them not only in academic subjects but as well as exhort them to take part in extra

curriculam

of or relating to an academic course of study

curricular

activities. By which student can explore their hidden talent in different sectors

such

as art and sports.

Secondly

,

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,

in

school

they learn very

inportant

of great significance or value

important

skills like

coperation

joint operation or action

cooperation

co-operation

and

competion

a deep awareness of and sympathy for another's suffering

compassion

competence

competition

which are necessary virtue

to

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of

being a

successful

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success

in life.

Therfore

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Therefore

,

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,

school

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the school

is responsible for cultivating very important values for their

good

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better

future. With regard to parents, they nurture their kids with rigorous effort to make them to achieve everything in their life. Even though teaching at

home

is not very popular in our contemporary society

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,

irs

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

benefits cannot be overlooked.

First thing

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The first thing

is to consider parents are the only one who can understand

temperament

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the temperament

of their children and they provide them critical feedback time to time to make them decide wisely between right and wrong.

Moreover

, parents know very well

interst

a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something

interest

of

ther

of them or themselves

their

the

other

children and they can develop

teir

of them or themselves

their

method of teaching

accordingly

and can make

boring subject

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a boring subject

boring subjects

in

intresting

arousing or holding the attention

interesting

one.

Hence

, parents can teach their child for their

ovelall

involving only main features

overall

development. In my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe

study

at

school

makes our children more responsible,

discplined

obeying the rules

disciplined

, caring and respectful

.

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.

In addition

, they understand the importance and value of others by

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

with other children.

Furthermore

, in order to compete globally

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,

they need to

broden

make broader

broaden

their horizon which is possible only by

school

education. In conclusion

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,

while different people have different views,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think

home

study

cannot compete with the positives of

school

study

.