Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lately, it has become a contradictory issue that, some people think excessive money is

spending

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spent

on old buildings to look after and to reconstruct, while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that, modern building can be introduce by demolishing the old ones. My firm conviction in its

favor

promote over another

favour

is that, it will be an optimistic solution if modern building can be introduced rather than the ancient ones. In

this

essay, I will support my

opine

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opinion

with examples It cannot be denied that, historical buildings are representing our traditional and cultural

identity but

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identity, but

we all so have to consider that people are no longer

interest

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interested

with

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in

the old building due to risk of accident.

First

of all, with the revolution of technology our modern

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

also

has changed than the previous time. People are no longer

interest

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interested

interesting

to visit these old buildings as most of them are ancient and there are no modern facilities

such

as, Air conditioned, electricity, Close-circuit camera, lift, and generator.

Moreover

, as most of the buildings are ancient building so they are all under alarming condition, anytime they can fall down and can cause of major accident. Particularly, those building stand beside the roads and they do not

sufficient

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sufficiently

suffice

security system.

Secondly

,

government

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the government

spent too much money to look after

this

historical building. There is

chance

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a chance

of corruptions. In

this

case, Bangladesh could be

salient example

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a salient example

salient examples

where government one thousand

dollar

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dollars

to reconstruct

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reconstruct

historical building but

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the historical building, but

the historical building but

instead

of repairing

this

building the museum authority took the money and gone away.

Moreover

, the expenses get double to reconstruct

these building

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these buildings

as they are backdated.

Furthermore

, some building can be

design

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designed

as it is by implementing some modern technology. There are,

however

, some people think it is our history is our identity and government should focus on it. If

this

historical building demolish

then

our identity might lose. Our younger generation will not be able to know their history. Countries cultural value may loss. To recapitulate, it can be said that, even though ancient building bear our

history but

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history, but

it

is

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also needs

also

need

to be consider

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to consider

the safety and security of people. It will be an optimistic solution, if modern building can be introduce rather knocking down the ancient ones. I suppose, it will encourage the tourist to visit modern building due to modern facilities. It

also

can play a vital role to improve

countries economy

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the country's economy

country's economy

.