Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology
is flourishing
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has been flourishing
by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues while keeping ourselves updated with the latest news and current affairs.
Therefore
, a fair amount of people believe, a conventional way of
newspaper
reading will be disappeared. I do not completely accord with it because a conventional
newspaper
is an easiest and cheapest way to get news. To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the traditional ways of getting news are still popular.
First
of all, reading
newspaper
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newspapers
a newspaper
has become the ardent habit of many people.
Everyone whether
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Everyone, whether
from affluent or middle class are seen desperately waiting for paper in
morning
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the morning
and enjoy it reading with a cup of tea.
Moreover
, these are the
portable
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most portable
, cheapest an easiest way of knowing about the global activities. It can be carried from one place to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
in the bag and available at
economical price
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economical prices
an economical price
. It is so handy and merely by continuing flip of pages can make you omniscient.
Secondly
, electricity and other appliances are not required.
Moreover
, the other attachments are like icing on the cake.
For instance
, the Hindustan times
has
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have
multiple attachments like women’s fashion, career guide, culinary art and so on.
However
, undoubtedly, technology has given the radical approach to reading news,
for example
,
videos
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the videos
provide a full and clear view to reading
besides
that we can download, share and forward it to our relatives and friends. Needless to say that
technophobic
will be having no place in
this
ever-advanced modern world. To conclude, the lives of people are drastically affected by advanced versions of technology yet, in my opinion, it will not be able to pose threat to the existence of traditional
newspaper
and magazines.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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