You are planning to take a vacation Write a letter to a friend.In your letter: describe the vacation spot you have chosen explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.
Dear Kris,
Hello, I hope you and your family are well. I am writing
this
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one week.
First of all, I am planning to take a holiday, because I am worn out from my work and in order to recover from my depression. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, I have chosen one remarkable place. So, I decided to stay near the beach for about whole 7 days. There are lots of inexpensive fish restaurants.You know fish is my favourite meal,Linking Words
also
,I enjoy watching the ocean for hours,the waves and so on.
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, I have a week to spend my vacation. I spend the whole week fishing near the sea. After that, I would like to go to a seafood restaurant Linking Words
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also
Correct word choice
and also
library
if possible. Correct article usage
a library
In addition
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, I love to take part in clambake.
I cordially invite you to join my recreation, I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I would be very happy if you could come with me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
JasminaLinking Words
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea related to the prompt. Although your letter touches on different aspects of your vacation, a clearer structure with distinct paragraphs for describing the vacation spot, explaining your plans, and inviting your friend could enhance readability and coherence.
Coherence & Cohesion
Work on the logical progression of ideas by linking paragraphs and sentences more effectively. Use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., furthermore, moreover, in addition) to improve the flow of your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Carefully proofread your writing to correct grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. This will make your letter more coherent and easier to understand.
Task Achievement
Address the letter prompts more comprehensively. Describe the vacation spot in more detail, elaborate on exactly how you plan to spend your time, and make the invitation to your friend more persuasive and detailed.
Task Achievement
Maintain a tone that is appropriate for writing to a friend. While your tone is generally suitable, adding more personal anecdotes or expressions could make the letter feel more engaging and genuine.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,