You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr. Perera, I’m writing to express my profound interest in
participating a six
Suggestion
participating in a six
month working session offered by our headquarters in Ontario, Canada. I recently learned that the head office is recruiting a set of fabric
technolgists
a person who uses scientific knowledge to solve practical problems
technologists
technologist
from overseas to compensate the shortage of workforce to carry out their new project on ‘fish scales in fabric designing’.As the leader of the innovation team, getting myself involved in a global trend like
this
will be a really good opportunity for me to enhance the quality of fabric produced in our local company.
Moreover I
Accept comma addition
Moreover, I
will be exposed to the information related to international trade, strategies and demands which will help me in launching best products through our company. I will be much obliged if you could arrange my transfer for six months starting from
next
July to December. Ms. Leena agreed to take over my position during my absence. She will access me through mobile or email when necessary. Hoping for a positive reply. Thank you! Yours sincerely Yashika Satharasinghe

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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