some people think that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

To have many options to choose from is a common experience in the modern way of life.
Although
I believe
this
statement to be true, I do not believe it as the whole body of truth and in a comprehensive point of view, new things are to be considered. People these days have numerous choices. It is an accepted statement in my view. The diversity is an undeniable fact emerged more than ever before in the life of the human in the
third
millennium.
For instance
,
one
can select among many dishes in a restaurant at an affordable price, can opt for an endless list of TV or net-based channels, broadcasting many diverse contents and so on. Despite the fact explained above, I still believe we are
also
more than any time limited. By speculating the matter of "difference", it is revealed that it is a devised
one
of the most cases.
instead
Suggestion
Instead
of a genuine
one
. There are different paths to choose, but all ending to a single preselected destination I mean.
For example
,
one
can choose to study any subjects in the university; but at the end he or she should most probably work in a system, serving the interests of some super-wealthy capitals.
For example
, many engineers, writers, psychologists and marketers work for some few factory owners to sell their products and convince the community the subsequent irreversible environmental damages are not that much important to be concerned. The case of TV channels is
also
similar. They may present different genres, but they most often represent the same political ideals.
For instance
any type of movies or even cartoon these days involve eroticism as a fixed part. To summarize, I would like to paraphrase my ideas as even though we are exposed to many chances of selection, the options are not always truly different ones, but mostly different-looking.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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