More developing countries are given aid from international organisations to help them in their development plans.Some people argue that financial aid is important but other's argue that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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due to contemporary issues within developing countries, there are many aid have been given by international organisation in order to cope these country's problems. While the idea is widely accepted, there is a majority of people argue that it should be practical aids and advices
instead
of providing financial expenditure. Personally, I do not agree with
this
claim because of the need of both financial and practical aid to solve the problem of developing countries. On the one hand, to have a sustainable development, developing countries probably need a broader plan and genius advice to orient their way. It is clear that to solve the problem
such
as environmental pollution, those struggling countries need to have a clear pattern of what they should do to improve their citizens behaviours to the living environment which could be considered as the core reasons.
In addition
, to introduce the plan for restoration, there is
also
an urgent requirement the actual participation, volunteering for an instant, to ensure the success and reach the target aim.
For example
, many young nurses from the USA have been sent to Vietnam to provide professional training in many public hospitals to improve their recent services.
On the other hand
, while the importance of guiding is well considered, providing financial support should be taken into account.
Firstly
, most of the developing countries in recent years, have suffered the impact of financial burdens from international loans which is known as the most serious obstacle the slow down the whole country development.
As a result
, the thirst of international support is dramatically rising.
Secondly
, without any investment, it would be impossible to achieve the improvement in those countries.
For example
, if Australia did not invest money to build Can Tho Bridge to link the two sides of Mekong Rivers, it would be impossible for them to increase the economic activities in the Mekong Delta as well as the whole country. In conclusion, I strongly believe that developing communities do need comprehensive orientations from other successful nations which might require the participations of many authorities as equal as the financial support to restore national issues of these countries.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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