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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

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The table illustrates, the visitors crowd from the UK to various destinations
such
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 as Wester Europe, Northern Europe and other miscellaneous regions for unique purposes
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 as Holiday, Business, personal visits and other general reasons, across the 4 years starting from 1994 to 1998. On a whole, it is clear that, in the year 1998, higher number of people from the UK have travelled and, Western Europe seems to be the favourite destination. To start with the destination reasons, it is observable that almost 80
percent
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 of the public has flown high for their vacations, started with 15K in 1994 and ended with 20K in 1998, making it the top reason for flying across nations. While, unknown reasons have made less than 10
percent
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 of people to commute, making it the least cause for the travel. Moving on to the most sought destination, Western Europe has grabbed the place, with more than 90
percent
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 population travelling here, every year. Whereas, North America and other areas account for less than 10
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. It is intriguing to note that,
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 trend has been similar over the years from 1994 to 1998.
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