A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?
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have
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essay will interpret the situations from both the aspects.
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a delightful future
benifits
from the authority.Suggestion
benefit
benefits
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transportation
transportations
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employees
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is no job-risk as private jobs.It is fixed for in or at that place
there
lengthy period
of time.Suggestion
a lengthy period
lengthy periods
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,
oppurtunity
of a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
transfering
their job and position to their children transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
incase
of death.Suggestion
in case
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guarantee
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government
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inorder
to motivate the other people so that they can Suggestion
in order
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in a good position in their respected countries.They have the chance of helping the poor people who are in need because they have astonishing salaries and have the pride of fulfilling the concerns raised by a particular community.
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career
,
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,
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their workAccept comma addition
authorities, notwithstanding
,
they are trying in every aspect to help and participate intriguingly.They play a crucial role in every sector and department.
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the Accept space
,
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