A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?

To commence
,
Accept space
,
long term work candidates of an
adminstratio
a method of tending to or managing the affairs of a some group of people (especially the group's business affairs)
administration
has
Suggestion
have
gigantic profits so that they are entitled to request to participate in
works
Suggestion
the works
so that in
further
they can give something back to the society.It is important
fo
appropriate to; intended for
for
of
to
every individual who are not having
government
jobs.
This
essay will interpret the situations from both the aspects. The candidates who are currently doing long-term jobs has
delightful future
Suggestion
a delightful future
because they receive much
benifits
Suggestion
benefit
benefits
from the authority.
For example
,
Accept space
,
free railway
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
transportations
will be
provide
Suggestion
provided
for the railway
empolyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
and
their
in or at that place
there
is no job-risk as private jobs.It is fixed for
lengthy period
Suggestion
a lengthy period
lengthy periods
of time.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
they have the
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
of
transfering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
their job and position to their children
incase
Suggestion
in case
of death.
Also
,
Accept space
,
they have a good chance of
refering
make reference to
referring
offering
to students in the form of loan
guarentee
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantees
guarantee
who migrate for
further
studies abroad.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
to divulge the
government
employees are made to volunteer work
inorder
Suggestion
in order
to motivate the other people so that they can
also
build their
carrier
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
in a good position in their respected countries.They have the chance of helping the poor people who are in need because they have astonishing salaries and have the pride of fulfilling the concerns raised by a particular community. In my opinion
,
Accept space
,
many people of higher
authorities notwithstanding
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authorities, notwithstanding
their work
,
Accept space
,
they are trying in every aspect to help and participate intriguingly.They play a crucial role in every sector and department. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
the
government
job-seekers
nonetheless
of their working and earning
,
Accept space
,
they are jubilant to give their time in giving the best back something
to
Suggestion
in
public.In future
,
Accept space
,
the
government
delightfully aims for the development of the country.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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