Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money,others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Different people have a different situation and another way to deal with their problems. Issues like an unsafe
or running out of money, in
essay I'm going to discuss both types of people,
I will share my opinion.
First I
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First, I
will begin with those who accept any situation just because they are afraid to move forward or maybe that are lazy to find another
job but
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job, but
the actual reason because they feel relaxed in the comfort zone. Along with that they don't try to help the self to better life in terms of
satisfaction and good income. The
type who tries to change and find a solution, not to stand without any move to look forward for changes those surly have confidence.
Moreover they
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Moreover, they
might face like staying without
a job
for some
they might dot have any money to
survive but
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survive, but
still they will try until they find
alternative way to fix everything.
Finally I
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Finally, I
will share my opinion, I go with those who always wants to change the situation, it happened with me 3 years ago I left my company because I felt nothing is going to change I'm just receiving my salary every month but without any increment or upgrade. I decided to leave the place and look for a different
reason to be
happy and satisfied about myself, I found another
with better salary and Great role so I always recommend to everyone don't enter the comfort zone.
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