Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today.

The main reason of poor
education
quality among children nowadays is that they spend a lot of their
time
watching
television
programmes and do things that are remotely connected to quality
education
. I completely agree with the statement that
television
cannot replace the
book
as a learning
tool
as it is far less educative and far more addictive.
Firstly
,
television
cannot replace books as learning materials owing to the fact that children often misuse
television
in the disappearance of
parents
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the parents
.
For instance
,
educative
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educational
education
programs
are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children prefer
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are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children preferring
prefer less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children
are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children preferred
are less attractive than the cartoon shows and other programs children prefer
to watch. While there are lots of educative and suitable programs, it is not unusual that a child would prefer to watch programs that entertain more than educating. Another reason
television
is not as suitable as a
book
because when children learn through
television
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television, then
then
their focus will be on audio-visual presentation, not in learning. Whereas if they follow
books
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books, then
then
they focus on books and the lessons it offers. It is often heard that many children watch TV for long hours and
that is
detrimental to their health.
Television
programs are addictive and many children do not concentrate on other important things like study or outdoor activity when they become addicted to watching TV programs.
Finally
,
television
cannot replace the
book
as learning
tool
due to
television
might be a
tool
that would be
wastage
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a waste
waste
of
time
.
However
, if children spend more
time
in reading books there is no chance of wastage of
time
. The primary focus of
television
is entertaining people while books are considered as the cornerstone of knowledge and wisdom.
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In
conclusion,
although
television
is more entertaining than books, it cannot become a great
tool
for
education
as books are for children. The
book
is still the most appropriate learning
tool
and the
television
can never replace it terms of
child’s
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the child’s education
a child’s education
education
.

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