These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Indeed, these days very few choose to become secondary
teachers in schools because of many reasons.
For instance
, the Education system has evolved a lot in the recent times, so as the students. In order to keep up with the system, Secondary
teachers have to update themselves with constant learning and different activities. A teacher has to be up to date to guide the student in the right direction with lots of references relating to the subject, to
the teacher has to constantly do a research and evolve with the new information. Nowadays, teachers constantly engage with students with different means to solve the queries.
puts them under lots of pressure to maintain the work life balance. In order to tackle the situation the government has to come up with some benefits for the secondary
teachers, in terms of pay raise and additional benefits. A
a special group delegated to consider some matter
has to be formed to see the
take exception to
faced by the Secondary
teachers and try to
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
them at the earliest and make the job
arousing or holding the attention
. Few drawbacks are working very late than and average working employee and getting paid less demoralises them.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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