You work for an international company, and would like to spend six moths working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter *Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months *Say how your work could be done while you are away *Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. George,
I am writing
this
letter to ask for a
permission to Remove the article
apply
work
at our company's headquarter
in London, The United Kingdom for a half year.
As you know, I've been promoted to assistant product manager and I am working hard to collaborate with my team to enhance the revenues and increase our brand reputation.
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headquarters
However
, I realised that some training sessions that held in the UK which is our head office arranges
frequently.
I am quite positive that the opportunity to Wrong verb form
arranged
work
with our company's headquarters for six months will further
. With this
experience, I believe that I can enhance my working knowledge and give fabulous ideas related to the global market.
While
I'm away, I will check my emails daily, and be available for emergency phone calls. Once I got back to the office, I would endeavour to work
extra hours in order to catch up on anything I had missed. I would need your support to get approval so that I can work
in our company's head office.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Best regards,
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Task Response
Clarify the reason for wanting to attend the training sessions held at the head office. Currently, it is mentioned, but not clearly connected to the overall objective.
Coherence and Cohesion
Review and refine the transition between the paragraphs to ensure smoother readability. For instance, linking the experience gained in the HQ directly to how it will benefit the team here would help.
Task Response
The letter maintains a professional and polite tone throughout, which is suitable for a formal request to a manager.
Coherence and Cohesion
The closing is respectful and anticipates a positive reply, which leaves a good impression.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.