Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The current state of the medical services in the world is very volatile. Some countries have less entry to medical services due to their feeble economies so the W.H.O supports them to get proper entry and some countries have proper access to medical services because they have proper economic strategies.
, when we take the world almost all the developed countries have a better healthcare service, but citizens are able to take advantage of it only through a medical covered benefit. If anyone has no entry to an allowance benefit, they will not be able to connect medical services with a freedom in their mind because it would cost them an arm and a leg. As a resident of a developed country in the middle east I have utilized the services of a medical coverage provider. Sometimes some of the medicines or some medical requirements are not covered through the medical coverage. At these kinds of instances, I have paid a huge sum of money to carry out those medical services. So, I agree that the medical services which are available in some countries are very expensive. And as a citizen of a developing country, I have experienced free well-being
as well. Even if the service quality is slightly below industry standards, people enjoy it because it doesn’t cost them financially. Some of the governments in the developing countries concentrate on
the health importance
getting financial aid from developed countries or Non-Governmental Organizations. By doing
they make sure that people have access to free health
, which will ultimately lead to mitigating risks of diseases and other well-being related issues. Concentrating on these factors, I believe that for some countries in the world health
would not be very expensive

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