Nowadays, it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

These days,
marriage
and having a child have been carefully decided among people compared to the decade ago where people easily married when they fell in love. I believe that
this
phenomenon has a positive impact on our society and will describe in
this
essay.
To begin
with,
marriage
is something far more than just an intimate relationship. Before we end up being married, we should consider various factors
such
as financial situation to raise a kid or mortgaging a house,
life-long
continuing through life
lifelong
commitment, or perhaps the opinions of each others' family members. On top of that, we need to take account of that every single decision has to be made with a partner whether you like it or not. If
marriage
is decided at a relatively young age without deeply considering any factors mentioned above, it will highly likely cause many social issues ranging from abortion to unhappy married life, or even perhaps divorce that will leave a scar in their kid's mind. Fortunately, the trend toward when to marry has been delayed and it has many social benefits. As people married
late
Suggestion
later
, they have enough time to build
foundations
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the foundations
like trust, respect and emotional intimacy to support their relationship forever. Another meaning is that they will less likely to divorce, tackling various social issues,
such
as inclined numbers of an orphan, domestic violence, or even suicide. Another advantage would be that people have more time to finish their educational stage and find a satisfying job, which means that
instead
of struggling
in
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with
debts for buying a house or raising a kid, they will have a financially stable status. In conclusion,
marriage
at an early age would be your worst choice. If you carefully spend more time
to consider
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considering
marrying with the loved one, it will benefit both your happy married life and social aspect.

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