Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree ?

Price
of any
item
is considered to be the most important factor to make a decision to buy a certain product
such
as mobile phone or any kind of service which may be a medical treatment
also
. I believe that making a decision to buy any
item
should depend on the necessity of the product rather than its
price
. On the one hand, purchasing any
item
, which is not really required, just by looking at the lower or discounted
price
result in unnecessary spending.
For instance
, these days, online shopping sites are trending all over the world and
such
sites give a huge discount during festival sales, which usually make any
shopaholic
Suggestion
Shopaholic
person to get attracted towards these items and most of the time those
person
Suggestion
people
persons
end up buying the items without even realizing the actual need of it.
This
result in wastage of the hard-earned money.
Additionally
, few products are used just to fulfil the basic purpose, so one should not splurge their hard-earned money by buying expensive items until and unless they are sure about using its additional features.
On the other hand
, people sometimes need to buy few things which are absolutely necessary for their livings like medical help and good education. Paying huge amount for
such
things will always provide good returns in the future,
therefore
an individual should not think about the
price
before buying these.
In other words
, people should always look for the best when it comes to the necessities of life, without which somebody cannot survive or lead a good life. Education is one
such
thing as youth who get good education will get better career options and will be able to earn better than those who did not complete a course because of its higher fees. In conclusion, while people ought to think about the cost of products before making any purchase, I think
price
Suggestion
the price
prices
should only be taken into account after considering the
item
's necessity.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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