In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past?

Nowadays, one of the essential issues that authorities encounter with it is a number of children in families. Actually, quantity of children in each family in the pass decades were more than now.
Although
there are a number of drawbacks occurring to have several children, I believe the benefits involved are more. On the downside, there are some disadvantage
for
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of
having a big family.
To begin
with, by increasing the number of children in families, the amount of necessities to support their needs should be quite enough.
Therefore
, provide all facilities to live by continent are more likely easier
to
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for
small families. Take a house for living parents and children together as an example; providing that how
much
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many
families are small the houses have sufficient rooms to leave, but
in
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with
big families' children would be share rooms together and less freedom.
Moreover
, in the most of the big families the duty of mother is that to provide the
children
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child's
children's
child
needs and take care of them.
Thus
, the more larger families, the more problems they would be facing.
However
, the plus side cannot be ignored. Communication is one of the benefits of growing up in the large family.
That is
to say, the children that grow up in families with more people show better social behaviour and can easily enhance their relationship at school and society. A good illustration
this
is teamwork activities at school, which student coming from big families could probably adopt themselves sooner. In the meantime, the relationship between brothers and sisters
at
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in
big families is one of the factors that can help to sustain families quite a resistance.
Hence
, children of big families have not only good communication, but they are more sociable in comparison with children of small families. To conclude, regardless of the drawbacks and difficulties of having a big family, I personally think that growing in big families can be more problematic, which children can take on very important issues how to face with
this problems
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this problem
these problems
in their future life.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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