creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. there should be no government restrictions on what they do. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The issue of freedom of creative
artist
Suggestion
artistic
art
has extremely grown in importance in most countries over the few decades. It is considered that government should not interfere with their work and the artists should be free to do whatever they want. While I accept many artists are sharing their valuable ideas for the tremendous development of
this
world, I believe some certain area they should be controlled by the rules and regulation. Admittedly, the human civilisation has approached
this
sophisticated stage because many creative artists have bestowed us an enormous number of significant ideas and opinions in the form of pictures, music or films. As an example, many creative artists like Leonardo Da Vinci, Pablo Picasso and Michelangelo Buonarroti had
first
drawn the design of an aeroplane; but, at that time nobody could think that a human can fly and everybody thought it was just imagining of his mind.
Although
it required a long time, but it became true that human now can fly.
This
example makes it clear that the work of artists can lead to immense improvement of humankind.
Therefore
, many people think that they should be free with their works for the advancement of the human being.
On the other hand
, there are some vital reasons why the work of artists should be controlled in some certain area.
Firstly
, most people in
this
world believe in the God; so the
artist
should not create
such
type of acts, which hurt the religion. If
this
type of activity they make, it may bring colossal embarrassment to the human society.
Secondly
, the
artist
should not go against any culture and costume of a country. In
this
certain field, the government can limit the practice of an
artist
. In conclusion, the creative artists are indispensable in our society,
although
Suggestion
although some
although
some artists have tended to draw against our cast, creed, and religion. In my opinion,
this
tendency may call harmful to our mankind so that the government should control the activity, which can go directly against our culture and religion.

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