An increasing number of people are preferring to eat fast food regularly, it causes a lot of heath issues. Some people think the only solution is to ban it completely. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era fast paced lifestyle, people not getting enough time to cook meals in their home from scratch.In that hurry, they opt speedy manners to overcome the delay.
such
Suggestion
Such
options are easier to look, but they are creating issues related to health, opined by some people to completely ban these type of
food
items. I totally disagree with
this
idea, buttressing it in the upcoming paragraphs.
to
Suggestion
To
begin with
,
Accept space
,
fast
food
is the better alternative compared to the traditional ones in the aspect of preparation time.But fast
food
contains less nutritional values and high calories. Fast
food
is a least preferred option for people todays because manufacturers cannot give assurance over their products that which materials used, cooking process etc.Though they have nutritional values over their packing or on their menus. On the other flip, if the government imposes ban on these
food
items, it will be
hurdle
Suggestion
hurdles
to people.There is
also
a denying fact that
this
type of
food
is not a habit for the people.
besides
Suggestion
Besides
that, having fast
food
occasionally doesn't create any harm
.
Accept space
.
In order to tackle health issues government should bring awareness regarding the regular usage.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, proper time management should be encouraged to ensure proper meals and adequate workout. Restricting
food
habits may not help overall health In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
it is totally
injusticible
to ban fast
food
as it is not the one and only remedy.
instead
of
this
, collection of action must be done

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