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In spite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Agriculture is the main source of
food
 supply in the
world
. With the expanding population in the
world
, the demand for agriculture accelerates annually. Technology has contributed extremely to satisfy the accumulating demand on agricultural products by introducing innovations to increase the harvest. Unlike in history, currently more harvest can be yielded from the same portion of square feet of a farmland due to genetically
improved
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improve
 plants and seeds. Even though many technological innovations occur in
agricultural industry
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the agricultural industry
, is the global production enough to satisfy the
hunger
 of every habitant? Many countries in African region report deaths due to starvation.
Furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
 has been reported that developed countries dispose their extra agricultural production
in to
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into
 vast ocean in order to maintain the monetary value in the market.
Do every human have
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Does every human have
 equal access to
food
? Due to poverty, restrictions on international market and competition in
business
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the business world
world
, unfair
distribution
 of agricultural products occurs frequently. Rich has access to excess amount of
food
 while impecunious human dies
in
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of
hunger
. If the global leaders exercise a policy of fair
distribution
 of
food
 among the
world
, it might alleviate
world
’s
hunger
. In order to assure fair
distribution
,
Accept space
,
 rich can try donating and sharing
food
 with the ones in need. Another solution is to innovate a technology which able to cultivate barren lands. If the Sahara desert can be turned
in to
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into
 a fertile land
,
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,
then
 it would mitigate starvation in Africa. Transforming
ocean water
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the ocean water
in to
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into
 mineral water is another solution that assures enough production in agriculture. In conclusion
,
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,
 even with the technological advances occurred in
agricultural sector
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the agricultural sector
,
world
’s
hunger
 is still an
uncurable
incapable of being cured
incurable
 situation. By practicing fair
distribution
 of
food
 and accumulating agricultural lands
,
Accept space
,
world
 leaders will be able to reduce the
hunger
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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