Todays children are living under more pressure from the society than the children in the past. To what extent do you agree or diagree give your opinion.

As per my views in the above statement is completely true that in the present scenario the young people are breathing in the high load of the general public. They are totally depending upon the general public. They do not wear simple clothes. They do not live simple. They are wasting their money and time to show the other people that how we are living. They cannot afford a car even they buy it to show the public people. I think
this
difficulty is very much higher than any other trouble. In the past days when people were living simple they were happier because they don’t waste their money. They didn’t think about the other people. In these days we are after each other.
For example
, if someone brought a new van
then
I must buy a van even if I can afford it or not. If they purchase a new car,
then
automatically they will be in high strain. They will have to pay the loan amount.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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