Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool. Which is why children are less well educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Recent years, children spend their most of time watching television. Whereas it doesn't supersede books as an education enhancement tool. In my opinion,
TV
shows hardly make the offsprings intelligent. On the one hand, the books are more included with a plethora of information.
Hence
,
although
,
TV
act as an entertainment for teenagers, it doesn't facilitate the theoretical ability in-depth.
For example
, a child whose wish to become a nurse, can never qualify the entrance exam by watching the
TV
series and shows. It should need technical intelligence which solely get by reading books.
Moreover
, a book is a silent tool, that help to improve reading skills.
On the other hand
, even though, the
TV
has bad impacts on the student's life, by seeing some useful videos
such
as related to the study topic, relevant topic will improve memory power. Masses remember majority of ideas or content when they are visually exposed to it.
Instead
of trivial shows, significant shows wouldn't divert the mind from academic. In conclusion,
although
TV
has a vital role in daily life, books are the most decisive tool in order to gain theoretical proficiency.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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