Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

This
is very true that science and technology,
both
the subjects are more significant than the other one, but history subject is
also
very much essential for the students. I am going to discuss the importance of
both
the subjects in the following paragraphs.
First
of all, I would like to talk about the subject history, which is
also
very important because students must be aware about the past days that what had happened in their country and historical persons showed their talent. What was the problems at that time and how they faced that problem? If no one will study about the history,
then
how we can tell the scarification of our martyrdoms? How we will tell that our country was under the British rural. When science and technology is taking place in today’s life,
then
these
both
the subjects are
also
very important. As we all knows that computers are being used at everywhere almost in all the fields. Scientist are
also
working very fast. In the present day’s peoples are going to the moon. So these are
also
very significant to be aware about these.
For example
, the digital India mission has been started by our Prime Minister Sh. Narendra Modi and Digital Currency are
also
being used in some of the countries. So at
this
time if we have no knowledge about the technical subject,
then
how we can compare with ourselves to the society.
Finally
, I would like to say that
both
the subjects are imperative for us to study.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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