Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

All the students are not in the same situation. Everyone is different from each other. We will discuss about both the situations in the upcoming paragraphs. It is very true that learning in collections is better because while learning in groups it is very important to discover new ideas about the topic. If we start studying in clusters everyone will think about the solutions.
For example
, if we are talking about the subject mathematics, everyone is solving an exercise,
then
they can discuss with each other about the solution. When we start cramming in sets, it means the minds starts working in groups. Sometimes it is not suitable to
study
in groups because in every groups a person who is a non serious must be present. He
/
she will disturb everyone. Nobody can concentrate on
study
.
For example
, if we are studying on tuition and there are some non serious boys who are not taking care of the others,
then
it is very difficult for me to concentrate on
study
. On the other side, it is
also
said that self-
study
is better than the other. By doing
this
at home, he
/
she can concentrate by herself
/
himself. He
/
she will solve the examples and knows about the way how the problem has been solved. He
/
she will revise his
/
her suitable time. But if he
/
she fails to solve any question
then
he
/
she cannot go
further
.
For Example
, one day I was solving mathematical equations and I tried very hard, but I was unable to solve that equation. At that time, I thought someone must be here for my help.
Finally
, it is stated that self-
study
is better than
study
in groups.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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