Some people think that having people from different nationalities and culture background to a country get a faster development. To what extend do you agree??
It is a fact that almost all countries, including the United States of America, have different population groups from other countries. In
this
essay, I will be discussing on how I strongly agree to why having expats from various countries with different cultural backgrounds can help a certain country
grow vastly.
Many people these days immigrate to foreign countries. This
is due to gaining more income, having a better life, or just fulfilling the dream to live in a place with great tourist attractions and views. United States of America's population are comprised of various nationalities from all continents such
as Filipinos, Indians, Koreans, Chinese, English, and many more. All of these nationalities come from unique countries along with their cultural backgrounds, thus
, they practice those even if they are in an alien country
.
Moreover
, these cultural traditions also
affect a person's personality, behavior
, and attitude especially at work. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
For example
, Filipinos value respect
and punctuality. When working in a foreign Accept comma addition
value, respect
country
, they tend to come early for work and they always respectful to their boss and colleagues, which promotes peace and unity among co-workers. Aside from work, the different cultural traditions are also
being experienced by the original citizens of a country
as shared with the foreign ones. Let's take the country
Saudi Arabia as an example. Before, they don't allow parties and loud music, but through the influence from other nationalities, they are slowly embracing it now.
To summarize, having different nationalities with various unique cultural beliefs or traditions will help a certain country
to be more developed not only economically, but also
it opens the mind of the people on embracing such
beautiful and new traditions which they can enjoy or adapt. Through this
acceptance, the people will prosper and the country
will grow.Submitted by lamamaoag on
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