The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

The table illustrates the percentage of students who went to four types of secondary school from 2000 until 2009. It is evident that in 2000, the voluntary-controlled schools had the biggest share in the mentioned year. In 2005, voluntary-controlled schools and
community
schools were approximately dominant types. In 2009,
community
schools by far were the biggest portion
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compared
to the other three types. In 2000, specialist schools have the least share with 12 % and we can see the same percentage
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of
community
schools.
On the other hand
, voluntary schools, possessed the largest portion with 52 % and grammar schools were 24 %
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the figure. In 2008, specialist schools stay relatively the same around 11
% while
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%, while
grammar schools and voluntary- controlled schools saw a dramatic decline
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19 % and 38% respectively.
Community
schools rose significantly to 32%. In 2009, grammar schools and voluntary – controlled schools followed the same pattern in 2008, and
declined
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declined, however
however
community
schools continued its upward trend and rose to 58%.

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