People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibilities to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

Nature is a gift
by
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from
of
god
the supernatural being conceived as the perfect and omnipotent and omniscient originator and ruler of the universe; the object of worship in monotheistic religions
God
to mankind and it is the responsibility of every human being to take care of it.An
environment
plays a significant role in
survival
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the survival
of human beings as well as a home for various birds, animals, insects
etcetera
. But due to interference of human activities, ecological balance of
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
get
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gets
disturbed. Even public is aware of
significance
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the significance
of
atmosphere
still they are doing nothing. In following paragraphs, I am going to explain the reasons why human beings
are not paying
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Is not paying
Are not paying
attention towards nature and the steps that
government
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the government
governments
should take to preserve an
environment
. There are
plethora
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a plethora
of factors that people are not taking responsibility to safeguard the nature. Predominant of them is increasing population. Individuals are cutting down the trees and forests in order to utilize that land to construct houses. Due to decrease in number of trees,
earth's temperature
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the earth's temperature
is increasing causing global warming. Beside that, people are setting up more
industries in
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industries, in
order to meet the demands of extending population. Emerging Smoke from
such
factories
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factory
factory's
pollutes air and waste materials from industries are dumped into water
resources causing
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resources, causing
water pollution and kill various marine bodies.
Moreover
, to improve the quantity of vegetables, fruits, commercial crops
etcetera
, individuals
use
fertilizers and other chemicals which
causes
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cause
soil and water pollution.
Leeping
further
, Human beings have become materialistic. They do not consider about
environment but
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the environment, but
the environment but
they are worried about their status in society. They spend money on buying luxurious cars. They do not
use
public transports but private means of transports. More
use
of private means
cause
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causes
air as well as noise pollution. Government has to take serious steps to protect an
environment
. Authorities should arrange seminars to create awareness among general public and tell them about the importance of
atmosphere
. Legal bodies should make arrangements to celebrate
Environment
day every year and made it compulsory for every person to plant one tree on an eve of '
Environment
Day'. They should encourage people to
use
public transports rather than private. To gist, I would like to say that it is not only a prime responsibility of government to preserve nature but citizens should
also
come forward. It is a right time that people should come forward to protect an
atmosphere
otherwise
it will be too late and they will suffer from great lost.

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