Some people believe that government spends too much money on space research while there are still a lot of problems on the earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I am in total agreement with the statement. Apropos of the statement, very expensive
space
research
programs
are straining
Suggestion
is straining
the government budget, jeopardising essential and more pertinent issues like
education
and
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
which impact majority of the population especially in developing countries. Many developing nations, as well as
third
world countries, still have extremely poor literacy rates &
very high percentage
Suggestion
a very high percentage
of people lack access to even primary
education
. Very few people who can get basic skills like reading and writing are unemployable due to lack of proper vocational training. The government resources should be spent on something as basic and important as employable
education
. Basic
health
care
is
also
one of the most important issues. Exponentially increasing medical costs are making access to primary
health
care
out of reach for many. Maximum countries still lack the basic medical infrastructure. Governments should prioritise medical
research
making
health
care
accessible & far-reaching. Crime control, law and justice departments need more attention and budget and mass people are being directly affected with the lacking of basic needs. When many people starve every day and lots of people are not getting proper treatment,
space
research
seems a luxury we can’t afford. We need to focus on the very basic needs
first
and
then
when we have the capability to conduct the
space
research
, only
then
we should continue
this
. To conclude, though some think that
space
programs are essential for the advancement of science and technologies, a multitude of basic problems like
education
& medical &
health
care
should be given a paramount importance.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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