Some people think that the only way to have succes in business is to have unique product. What factors, do you think, influence the success of a company?

There
are
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is
wide range
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a wide range
of
product
available in the
market
and every supplier are
competiting
compete for something; engage in a contest; measure oneself against others
competing
for their survival. Certain individual believe that the only way to
successful
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success
in business is to have extraordinary items. In my opinion, I think price and the quality are the major factors influencing the
success
of an organisation.
To begin
with, People are thinking that creating
a
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an
unusal
not usual or common or ordinary
unusual
unusable
annual
product
and selling in the
market
will provide
success
. But I think
this
cannot be a factor for consideration because the price of the produced
item
play a significant role in deciding the factor. People always do
comparison
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a comparison
of the
item
with the available alternative
product
in the
market
. If the replacement
product
cost
less in comparison to the new launched
product
they will never buy the latest
product
and when the
product
is unsold it cannot be successful.
For instance
,
ABC corportion
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an ABC corporation
ABC corporation
ABC corporations
in India has invented a Soap and for creation it
cost
huge amount to the company. All the expenditure was included to
cost
of
unit
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the unit
a unit
units
.
This
soap has increased the price and people could not afford the new one.
Their
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There
were no sales of
this
item
.
Furthermore
, The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reason for unusual
product
being
success
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successful
is the durability of the
product
. Since the new
item
is created and launched in the
market
for the public. People are not aware of
this
item
in relation to the quality.
Previously individual
Accept comma addition
Previously, individual
in the
market
have never tried
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has never tried
this
as it was not aware to use it and
also
there are no review about the
product
from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. So that people can trust and buy
this
product
to use it. Example of ABC
corportion
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
, Soap from
this
entity was made available to the public and people did not buy
this
as they do not have any
feed back
the process in which part of the output of a system is returned to its input in order to regulate its further output
feedback
about the quality. It is completely new
item wheather
Accept comma addition
item, whether
item whether
item weather
it is good or bad was never known and
hence
people avoided buying it. In conclusion, People though that extraordinary
product
will be
decide
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deciding
the fate of the company, I completely disagree with the notion, I think
cost
of
item
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the item
and the durability are the most common factor in determining the
success
of the newly launched
product
.

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