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Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study. but others think children can learn effectively in school with teachers. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Many assume computer and
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internet
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the internet
 are crucial in children's education. The rest feel, only teachers in school are important and recent technology advancements can adversely impact the children.
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 essay discusses in details about which approach is effective. In my opinion, technology is the future in any field and the kids should be up for the game.
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Internet
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The internet
 has always been the game changer since its inception and will continue to be so. It is always good for current generation to learn new things and get a grip on it. The young wavering minds can get a direction and guidance through the eyes of
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internet
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the internet
.
Internet
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 can help the children explore the world with the luxury of sitting at home.
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, education is best given directly by a teacher. Primary building blocks of human evolution: discipline and dedication can only be taught by a committed teacher. Computers and
internet
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 lack the human touch and emotions.
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, adult supervision is always recommended whenever a child uses the desktop or
internet
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 since
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internet
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the internet
 had a plethora of knowledge and
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 always need not be good. There are a lot of scandals and misleading information which kids are not mature enough to understand. To conclude, the pros of
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internet
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the internet
 and computers out-weigh the pros of traditional school teaching. Both computers and
internet
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 should be utilized to enhance the learning experience. Yet, the usage of these should be restricted and it is the responsibility of every mentor, be it child's parent, relative or teacher to make sure the technology is misused.

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