The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph depicts
proportion
of what kinds of people visit four different locations.
Add an article
the proportion
Overall
, it can be seen that cinema
is the most popular destination among three different types of people. Correct article usage
the cinema
However
, troupe
is the least preferred place to visit over the same data.
Looking at the graph in more detail, Add an article
the troupe
it is clear that
migrants from English-speaking countries spend most of their spare time in the library and in movie
Add an article
a movie
the movie
theatre
, 55% and 50%, respectively, followed by zoo
at 35%. Correct article usage
the zoo
However
, theatre
consumes less of their free time, which is only 10%.
Turning to the data of new migrants who were born in English-speaking countries spend most of their leisure time in the movie house, in the library and in zoo
range of 65% to 40%, Correct article usage
the zoo
while
theatre
is the least favourite activity at 25%.
It is clear that
,
the proportion of native Canadians who Remove the comma
apply
goes
to the zoo is 42%, which is slightly more than double Change the verb form
go
who
Correct word choice
that who
goes
to the Correct subject-verb agreement
go
theatre
. Notably, the rate of drive-ins and library
are %70 and %38, respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
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