Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

This
contemparory
characteristic of the present
contemporary
era expects everyone to be
technological
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technologically
technology
literate and advanced. People from all the age groups are using latest gadgets and children are no exception to
this
. But, many researchers are debating, whether to allow children using computers
from
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since
early childhood or not.
This
essay will discuss few merits and demerits of overusing
such
devices by stating some examples from the
reserach
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
done British University and WHO. On the one hand, technology has brought immense uses to
society
and made our life easy. These days, almost all the services are available online,
for instance
, to order food or to book movie ticket customers are using mobile phones and software application. Doing so, is convenient and just a click away. To cope up and stand in
competitive
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a competitive society
the competitive society
society
with a
confidence
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confiding
confident
children
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child
should learn computers in early childhood.
In addition
to
this
, it has been observed that they have strong grasping power and are
quick learner
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a quick learner
quick learners
, which makes them learn and adapt
with
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to
the changes swiftly. British University published a paper, which states children have twice
learning
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learned
capability as compared to adults.
This
research has shown the importance of learning in early ages.
On the other hand
, overuse of technological devices
such
as
computes
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computers
, laptops,
ipads
(trademark) a pocket-sized device used to play music files
iPod
and mobile phone may bring few problems to mankind.
Firstly
, spending uncountable hours in front of the screen may affect one's body posture and may cause
stain
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staining
on
eyes
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the eyes
. The research held by WHO states that people who have sedentary work
such
as work in IT
comapanies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
, are suffering from back pain and neck pain more as compared to others.
This
will be more serious if they start spending too much time in front of the screen from school days.
Secondly
, websites
such
as
facebook
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Facebook
,
youtube
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YouTube
and
instangram
are appealing and children found them more
attractive causing
Accept comma addition
attractive, causing
them to increasing their screen time about30 hours per week.
This
will not only impact their studies and concentrating power, but
also
isolate them from
society
. They may start lacking
communicational
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
skills as they would prefer to discuss over the online medium
instead
of meeting with their peers in person. Considering all the arguments and examples stated above, it is necessary to learn technology in earlier age to survive in
competitive
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the competitive society
society
;
however
, one should not overuse by taking the disadvantages into account. In
near future
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the near future
,
although
schools will be
preferring
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preferred
online mediums to teach students as it is convenient, appealing and interesting, they must be concerned about their negative impacts too.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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