Some people think that is a government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone in the community should take part in this issue. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that the

health

of p

opulation

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the population

populations

a population

can be s

erious problem

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a serious problem

in several countries. Some people say that the

government

of each country should play a major role in improving public

health

, while others disagree and think that every single citizen should take care of himself/herself. In

this

passage, both views will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached. To enhance overall public

health

, the

government

should support the issue in three major ways.

Firstly

, sport facilities should be more included and

also

improved. Nowadays, sport facilities are insufficient and mostly not in good conditions. Some people who cannot afford c

osts

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the costs

of a gym membership

therefore

have few options for exercising.

Secondly

, the

government

should promote welfares that citizens can receive medical guidance from public hospitals. When having correct understandings and directions, people can easily take care their own

health

.

Third

, the

government

should develop the mobile application which can record people’s exercising details which can be used as discounts for food or goods.

On the contrary

, people should

also

eat clean food and more careful about their diets. Foods with less carbs and f

at but

Accept comma addition

fat, but

more vegetables and fruits which offer vital nutrients can help people stay healthy. People should

also

exercise routinely and properly.

For example

, more walking on s

tairs

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the stairs

instead

of taking elevators can burn calories they h

ave took

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have taken

in one day.

Moreover

, people should change their habits when working in o

ffice.

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an office

the office

Sitting in front of a company all day long makes them exhausted. More walks in the office or changing positions can help them stay healthy in terms of their eyes can rest, their neck and back relax. In conclusion, I can deny that the

government

has to pay attention for the enhancement of sport facilities, introduce

health

guidance as people’s welfares, and support the policy for exchanging the distance of w

alk

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a walk

or run for discounts o

f

from a particular thing or place or position

off

food.

However

, these cannot be effective if the citizens themselves neglect to eat healthy diets, change their habits while working and encourage t

hemselves

objective case of they

them

to use s

tairs

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the stairs

or walk in short distance

instead

of taking e

levator

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the elevator

an elevator

elevators

or driving c

ar.

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a car

cars

the car

All of cooperation of both

government

and citizens can lead to a healthy community.