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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies..

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The advantages of young people working and
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 between finishing high school would be that it could build confidence in them and they get an opportunity to travel and explore
a country during
Suggestion
this country during a
this
 period of time.
Traveling
Suggestion
Travelling
 would divert the mind from studies and the person could learn new skills
such
 as learn a new language or new cuisine. Apart from
this
 socializing with people from different cultural backgrounds
also
 develops the student. There is
also
 a lot to learn from a different country in terms of technology and innovation. Students who work part- time during studies develop skills
such
 as communication, computer, and writing and would learn to adapt in a busy work environment. He or she would learn to work under pressure and would develop skills to face
audience
Suggestion
the audience
an audience
. They would end up earning some money for their university expense during
this
 period.
On the other hand
 the disadvantages of a student working during school would be that he or she may give up on pursuing their goals in order to earn a monthly income.
Secondly they
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Secondly, they
 would want to end up being more independent and drift away from studies. Their education would be unfinished.
This
 could lead to lack of basic education and unemployment. The generation today is very competitive. Qualification is the most important when it comes to finding a job and
second
 comes years of experience. In my opinion, it would be great if the youth would be encouraged to complete studies and later on focus on finding a job. Travel is something which is important for the younger generation to do during their vacation or time off from studies. There could be both advantages as well as disadvantages to
this
. The most important is to guide the youngsters to take the right path.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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