Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think this is happening? How can this problem be solved?

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a serious issue in many centres of cities all over the world. So, it would be meaningful to discuss why

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industry are not offered proper wages and

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, but

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working in various

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enterprises do not devote

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their duties in that they cannot be provided with the appropriate income as they spent a lot of time in working. In Korea,

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employees, they cannot enjoy even on

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to their

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situation, I am firmly of the opinion that the power of the government is necessary. In the first place, the authorities should intervene in the transport corporations and invest a lot of revenue in

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welfare or did not get proper profits. In

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way, the citizens cannot feel uncomfortable anymore, including too long service

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and do not need to pay for growing

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the employees working in the public

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industry can labour enthusiastically and have responsibility for their obligations.

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, in the short run, the government should serve and increase

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earnings. It is imperative to dispose of their

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so that they can be able to keep working with

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mind.

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the long run, the nations should make the

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that the employees who are in charge of their commuting loads

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security and they are desirable to get better

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. In conclusion, there are still severe causes and provocations which raise the

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fee. But, I am personally convinced that the government should tackle

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issue and take countermeasures sooner.