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write a letter to a friend who is currently moving to a new home. ask about new home say you can help and describe how you will help

#friend #home
Dear Pamelia, Hope you are doing great. I heard you will be moving to a new home soon. I guess it is much closer to your current working place. I wish
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 could accompany you as well. Is it located
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the
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high way
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 or near
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the Park Avenue hotel
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 I am writing to inform you that
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 have a week holiday ahead as
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 completed my present project. So I will be happy to help you
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 shifting and
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 for any shopping
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if needed. I
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 have
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piece
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 of new
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furniture
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
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 like
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beds
bed set
bedset
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 and cupboard at my place. If you wish you can shift it to your new place as I know
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 hard for you to bear all the expenses at once. Hoping to hear from you soon. Amelia.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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