Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting then is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the times in which we now live
,
Accept space
,
some opine that
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
preservation is not necessary and spending money is pointless.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completely disagree with
this
view.
Firstly
, it is absurd to argue that
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
has no place in the 21st century. The earth is not in existence just to satisfy humans.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
there are lots of proofs why we do not need to destroy every metre of land in existence to accommodate or feed the world population as
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
.
Secondly
, protecting wild animals is not wasteful because they have aesthetic benefits. Watching animals in their natural habitat is not just for
fun but
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fun, but
it is a very potent way to relax our bodies and mind.
This
is exemplified by how people troop to the parks
,
Accept space
,
zoos and areas under
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
conservation for
holidays
Suggestion
the holidays
.
This
has been proven to be an effective stress coping mechanism. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
we have no right to decide not to protect
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
and I believe all hands should be on deck to ensure they are properly conserved.

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