Obesity is an increasing public health related problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem, and suggest some solutions.
In recent years, the increasing number of
obesity
is becoming a serious social issue all over the globe. So, it would be meaningful to discuss why such
a problem has occurred and to suggest gow
to deal with in what way or manner or by what means
how
this
matter.
In the first
place, it is needless to say that an addicts
of computer and mobile phone are highly likely to gain the overweigh than other people in that Suggestion
addict
such
people commonly used to the sedentary lifestyle, and they even did not trying
to work out. According to a recent survey, the growing number of people spend their time in playing computer games Suggestion
weren't even trying
even weren't trying
even were not trying
even did not try
even didn't try
even were not tried
or watching
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or, watching
Youtube
' at least more three times in a day. In Suggestion
YouTube
natrually
leads people to become fat and has unhealthy habits. as might be expected
naturally
Secondly
, due to people' choronic
busyness, many people enjoy having the fast being long-lasting and recurrent or characterized by long suffering
chronic
food
and canned food
than making food
at their home in a healthy way. They do not havve
sufficient time of cooking themselves with healthy ingredients. Many individuals are highly likely to choose the fast have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
food
despite they already knew it has harmful effects on their health and make them obesity
.
Under Suggestion
obese
this
situation, I firmly of the opinion that the power of the government is necessary. Firstly
, several authorities wich
have undergone the increases of the citizen' interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
obesity
rate should frequently release the advertising about how important the regular exercise habits and how to prevent of being obesity
. In Suggestion
obese
this
way, people are highly likely to be stimulated by the propaganda and to discourage the citizen from consuming from a lot of sugar-additive foods. Another point worth mentioning is that the government should build the gym-related infrastructures. As widely reported, many people have difficulties in exercising due to the weather' condition as well as the gym classes are not economic prices, and they do not want to spend a lot of money on such
gym institutions. So, it cannot help establishing the gym buildings which is
cleaner, wider and reasonable costs. Suggestion
are
Then
a lot of people will register
and Suggestion
people will register
do exercising
for their health in that they do not need to struggle with the weather and high expense.
In conclusion, there are several causes and provocations which Suggestion
exercise
canraise
weigh of people. But, I am personally convinced that the government should tackle Suggestion
can raise
this matters
and take countermeasures in an effective way.Suggestion
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