Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, with growing population the real estate prices are sky-high in urban cities.
However
, many choose to live in
house
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the house
houses
, while others finds, staying in an
apartment
more convenient. In my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, there are more drawbacks than benefits of staying in a
house
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both the sides.
Although
, the property cost is extremely high in urban cities, still people prefer to live in individual homes because they feel the privacy is worth the cost. To illustrate, a family would get a lawn or a garden with the
dettach
showing lack of emotional involvement
detached
house
which will give more private
spcae
the unlimited expanse in which everything is located
space
spoke
to the member than living in
a
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an
apartment
and share the garden space with hundreds of others.
On the other hand
, many people feel it is cost-
effect
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effective
effectively
to live in buildings'
apartment
, as the
maintainence
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
is shared with the other residents of the building.
For example
, the water bills and the property taxes will be divided between the member of the society, whereas, in individual
house
the owner has to bare all the
expensies
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
expansions
expense
.
Hence
, an individual with a moderate income and financial
backgorund
a person's social heritage: previous experience or training
background
will choose apartments. Another benefit of
livining
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
in
a
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an
apartment
is, security. While there are many people living in the building, the
area
will be crowded with people most of the time and the chances of anyone to attempt to do anything wrong will reduce. While near individual houses, the
area
will be less crowded and chances of crime could be high.
For instance
, the
area
where there are more buildings, there
are
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is
also
alots
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a lot
a lots
of people shopping in supermarkets, waiting at
bus station
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the bus station
a bus station
bus stations
or walking around and the
area
is always lighted up.
This
is
a
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an
important factor, concerning common people in deciding to choose between a
house
or
apartment
To summarise, in my opinion, the disadvantages outweighs the advantages of living in a
house
as its more costly and less secure than living in a building
apartment
. And an average person will opt for
apartment
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an apartment
and not for a
house
.

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