In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is a well known fact that many people can earn higher salaries. Some people believe that it is beneficial for the overall development of the

country

, whereas others think that the

government

should control the earning and salaries of people. I will discuss both the views and give my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, how it is good for the

country

, if the people can earn higher salaries.

First

and foremost point is hard

work

. In the modern era, everyone wants to live in luxury lifestyle and fulfil their all the dreams,

this

can only possibly by receiving enough

salary

, if they receive high

salary

, with

this

they can do more and more hard

work

and do more

work

within a few hours, which is very beneficial for the development of the

country

For example

, a person can earn 5000 rupees per day and they can do more hard

work

, with

this

the others

also

motivate, they can

also

earn a high

salary

by doing hard

work

On the other hand

, why the

government

should control the salaries and earning of all human's.

Firstly

, in these days, partiality is very common in poor as well as rich people because nowadays in private schools, hospitals and some other places give more preferences to the rich people as compared to poor people. So,

that is

why, the

government

should control the high

salary

and earning, with

this

mostly earning of all the people become same,

as a result

the partiality becomes demolished. To conclude, I think that, both the views are good for the

country

, but the

government

gives

salary

to people according their

work

or experience.

Sun Mar 08 2020

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

280 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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wealth inequality
economic growth
motivation
talent acquisition
consumer spending
tax revenue
redistributing wealth
market forces
income disparity
social stability
freedom of choice
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