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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some groups of
people
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 believe that having knowledge of other languages is just for travelling and working in other countries.
However
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, others think there are more causes it is better for somebody to be able to speak another
language
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.
It is clear that
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 the reasons for learning a foreign
language
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 have a lot of benefits that are not limited to working and travelling abroad.
firstly
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, learning a foreign
language
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 for travelling and working is so useful for everyone. it means that someone who can speak, write, read and
also
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 listen in another
language
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 has
this
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 opportunity to communicate with other persons in that
country
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.
in other words
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,
this
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 person can easily match a new society which is the reason for improving individual skills.
For example
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, when two
people
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 travel to another
country
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 and one of them can speak in the
language
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 of that
country
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 they have gone and the other one can not do
that is
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 very clear to the person who is able to the knowledge of
this
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language
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 is more successful than other one. So knowing the
language
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 of the
country
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 that
people
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 want to go it is essential for them.
Secondly
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, being able to speak and know other languages has more important reasons. It means that learning another
language
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 can make
people
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 different and have a lot of changes in
people
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's lives.
For example
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, learning about new cultures, educating in other countries and
also
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 immigration on does countries. When someone knows another
language
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 have more opportunities than other
people
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 who do not have
this
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 ability. So knowing another
language
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 can help
people
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 to improve in a variety of options in their life for many goals. In conclusion, learning a new
language
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 is so helpful in a lot of positions in
people
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`s
life
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Your opinion

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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