Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear James, I was so disappointed and shocked after hearing that noise coming from my flat has been destroying your sleep. We had no idea that you were experiencing

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noise due to ongoing renovation work in my flat. I hope you will accept my apology. As you know, I am trying to renovate my kitchen and bedroom after my work. Unfortunately, someone broke into our house

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weekend and did a lot of furniture damage. We have tried to fix everything as before resulting in a lot of hammering and banging. Unluckily, we haven’t finished our kitchen yet. I will call a professional contractor for the remaining renovation and he will do all work in morning hours to avoid any

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disturbance during nights. I promise. Sorry for all the disturbance that occurred due to noise. I hope you understand and accept my apology. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Bill

Sun Mar 08 2020

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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